Final Revised piece

In the begining of the book, Artemis has been memory swiped. Now all his genius ideas, plans and past thoughts are gone. He then begins to act like a theif, and goes into his criminal life. Artemis has a lot of things on his back to worry about. I'm not so sure if he could complete all his important tasks. Artemis has to watch out because his old time rival is back, Opal Koboi. I think its the way that Artemis has to overcome his difficulties would probably be the hartdest thing for him,since he usually lives his life one way.

Artemis has had his memory all swiped away. Now he has his criminal lifestyle to fall back on. He plans to steal this famous painting from a German Bank. Although, every move he takes is being watched by his old time rival, Opal Koboi. She looks to seek revenge from Artemis. She was in a coma last year, and now she is making a comeback. Artemis has a big target on his head. He is also confused, wondering what his last thoughts were , but can't seem to remember.

As I'm reading through the story, I looked at details that described the pressure he goes through he pretty much feels like he is a disappointment Artemis is constantly checking to see whether or not Opal is spying on him and Butler, his friend. He constantly says "Is Opal looking at us , or I wonder if Opal is near" He is up for the fight and ready to go. Opal is an evil pixie that had set up Captain Holly Short for the murder of LEP commander, Julius Root. Which she actually did. Artemis's biggest problem is Opal and dosen't yet know how to overcome the huge obstacles she puts up. She is so dangerous.Someone like her should be locked in prison. In other stories I have read ,most characters have some uncertainies or something that they feel uncomfortable about. Whether it's a

Now that Opal is back and is ready to seek revenge on Artemis he has to be on the top of his game. Training and being on the lookout for any of her soldiers sent out to do the job. Artemis forgetting a lot of his past thoughts and memories didn't help him either. He dosen't even remember his run in with the fairies. Then Artemis and Captain Holly become friends and Artemis helps Holly with the murder case of Julius Root, which Koboi comitted. Everyone knew that Root was like a father to Holly, showing him how to fight and defend and how to show confidence in himself.

I know that its going to take a while for Artemis to get on the right track and I hope it happens soon. He has a lot of good friends and mentors to show him what he has forgotten. He has to be stopped from trying to steal the painting in the German Bank and he also promised to help Capatain Holly Short, because he was framed from the murder and Koboi is after him with many soldiers on the lookout . That's why Artemis has a lot on his back and has to get his act together before he ends up dead or in a coma just like Opal was in.